Zhu Ye
Julian Prentice
LIBY1551
July 23, 2009
Essay one
After I watched the Advanced Formats Presentation, I feel really regret that I didn’t watch this video earlier. When I was writing essays for other class, the professor always ask us to use reference in our writing; such as books, school articles and journal to support my idea. And I just search my topic and claims by google, then find something related and linked to my essay. I cannot properly evaluate my searched website and wasted many time. There are many differences between a scholarly journal article and a website. However, I used to think that scholarly journal articles and websites are almost the same, just appear in different places. But now I have a clearly recognize that these two things are different.
As the “Advanced Formats Presentation” says that “Web sites, to some, signify ‘junk’ information.” While the “printed book, journals and newspapers, signify reliable, quality information to them”.
The scholarly journals’ articles are known as peer-reviewed, academic, refereed, or professional journals. The characters of scholarly journal can be separated from different parts. First of all, the author is researcher or scholar in the field and famous; such as professor in Harvard University. Secondly, the audiences are other scholars and professionals or students who familiar with the field, not people with few education. And the purpose for scholarly journals is not for commercial use or trade, but to report original research, experiment, or theories. And it cited its sources clearly in the references list.
In other words, a scholarly journal should have a nice general title and give us detail of content, such as references list; also some specific authors mentioned and affiliations with known reliable sources. We can conclude as clean authorship, a specific date, brief but fairly substantial and useful information for academic writing. Government documents can be used in scholarly journals also. Scholarly journals are some available online and they have their own web sites too. So we cannot say scholarly journals are absolutely inked and printed.
We need reliable information in our academic research, so we don’t need “off limits” web sites which is unsuitable and useless in our research. The website with many ads is not trustworthy for academic research. The purpose for that website is to sell stuff rather than offer you academic knowledge. Uncertain authority and very sloppy references is main characters of an “off limits” website. Blogs is important and widely used today, but we cannot use personal blogs as a college-level research source. These social networks are very easy to recognize, so you don’t want to use people’s diary in Facebook or MySpace as a support sources. But we can still find sources for academic writing in web sites. A website with a .org or .edu may more reliable than others in research. There is a link “about us” tells the information about who created this website and response for the article it posted. By checking these, we can decided if it is “off limits” or suitable for use.

Hi Zhu,
回复删除I'm glad you have learned something from this class thus far! You give a good description of the differences between the two formats and address the process of creating journal articles very well. You should also give equal attention to the process of creating web content. You give a good discussion of off-limit websites. I still think your language is too close to that of other people's work (I see you used some of the language from the presentation). If you do this, you must quote the sentence (which you did correctly in the first paragraph, all you need to add is a citation).
You also did not address the fairness issue, which is asking you to discuss whether or not this question to differentiate between the two formats fair? Another question to think about: How do different formats manifest themselves online and does the process used to create the information in those formats change when online or in print?
You may redo and resubmit this assignment for more credit. Please get in touch if you have any questions about the essay or my feedback.
Journal v. Website Essay Scoring Rubric
The student understands the nature and characteristics of journals and website: Proficient
The student applies this understanding to concrete real world examples: Basic
The student recognizes and addresses the complexity and problems within the question: Insufficient